Very sad and deep. I loved it.

How could this not work, i loved the flow of it and the emotional quality. it was very deep and you give a sense of how much you had to go through by repeating yourself many times... i loved it. 5/5

That is a very good deep poem i loved it!!! ill never b as near as good u r

THIS POEM WAS AMAZING 5/5 NO DOUBT

Very well done alot of emotion deep deep feeling very good

Emotions nearly drip from it. i love that.. it goed deep, deeper then a persons soul.
keep up the stuff =]
5/5 BTW: ty for your comment;)

Keep this one for sure. The rhyming is perfect, the little lines put it in a good format.

I love how all your emotions went into this...really deep and really good job!