Wow. full of so much emotion but could definitely use some editing--- I would suggest going through and checking for spelling and necessary capitalization--- then edit the flow and try to SHOW how you feel... after that this could make an incredible poem! Keep up the great work!!

xxEvilAngelxx

Thankyou for the tips! : )

Wow. that almost made me sick becuase of how your parents feel toward you.:(

Lol, thanks...it makes me sick too.

Lol.....yeh, they suck but i like to write about things that hit close to home.

I didnt want to cry but sorry to say, I couldnt hold my tears for you. Its really heart breaking. God bless you. 5/5