or sign in with e-mail
Don't have an account? Register Here!
Awwww such a sweet poem. Who knew two Italians would fall in love? =] Beautifully written Jobo 5/5
Aww that was really touching. good job xx
"The happiness glows
From deep within"
Ohhhh, gotta love it. Awsome flow.
That was really awsome. The best thing about it is I can imangin you sitting there looking at the photos... 5/5 buddie. :]
Dean- Keep it real..
by Cyma Khan
Aww, cute poem! In the last line, I think you mean "meet" not "met". Also, this line: "And when I'm not" in the fifth stanza doesn't fit, the flow is off... I would suggest changing it to something else... Other than that, wonderful job!
Awww, that was so CUTE!
Very nicely written
Very nice. Emotions are greatly conveyed in this.
The only thing that threw me off was the 5-lined stanza at the end. All the previous stanza's are four lines long, so this was a little awkward since it was longer.
by Michael D Nalley
This poem reflects a lot of romantic imagery. I wiil say again that it takes talent to make a poem flow freely. You have that talent
Omg that how i fill about my ex but its even harder cuz he left me and he sits there and say he still love me....lol...
Another beautifully written poem... i loved it 5/5 keep it up
Omg i love this poem its exacally like i feel omg omg i love it great jog wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously i think this is the best it matches my every feeling!
by in spite of love
Wow, this is deep... ^-^ 5/5
I love this poem. it is amazing, i know exactly how you were feeling when you wrote it, amazing poem!
by I am
Nice Poem. I love it.
This peom is one of the sweetest love peoms ive ever read,
it is so from the heart..
simple words yet really from the inside of ur heart..
by e LIZ a beth
by The one and only[bre]
That is so passionate, it shouws how much you care for someone!! AWWW grat job keep it up :]
Ohh such a sweet and nice poem u have written keep going on with ur nice poems
Awwww this is so cute!!
Whys this not rated higher?? its got great feeling to it.... too many people think poetry has to rhyme