Your poem rockz, its gr8! :)

Wow...ur a really great poet!
the rhyming scheme is awesome and the message in the poem...its wow!

Hmm i have to say this ones my favourite out of the three. love it.
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Great poem is full of force and emotion and i can relate to it. 5/5 well done keep writing

The best poem

Not bad. i like the flow. 5/5

Good poem. Deep.