Tanz 4 da comment, il be puting another poem on later, you should chek it out, tanz again, bye bye.. :)

*Claps* vary awsome dude. Bloody awsome work for a 13 year old I must say. Ohh, keep going you're a natural.

Wow that was deep....ur very talented...keep it up!

I really like this one its really good

Lovely poem.
Sad.
Gave a five.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

This is a really cute poem. i loved it. keep it up
dee

Beautiful, sad and wonderful.. Great job 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

5/5 this is a beautiful poem and sad. i like the flow and structure. keep writing.

The best poem i ever read

Lol i give you a 5/5 and if your thirteen you deserve a 10/5 excellent job...very good

reminds me of my problem except i'm a guy so it's a wee bit different...lol

Great POem Dud..but Are u sure your noly 13 years of Age..just askin..but love the poem though..keep the good job up

Jammal

Very Good, well done! that one was deep! 5/5 keep up the good work!

Jeanette

Enjoyable poem

I like your poem because it's sincere and it is beautiful and good because of it.