This is an amazing poem. it's very sad, but i like it a lot. i think you did a wonderful job on it. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

+.+ I hope things get better +.+

Chel, what a sad penned you potray here, you describle them with beautiful emotions.... Without life, there is no eternity, The Lord, is on your side,
stay strong dear, He makes you wise, "Though living mistakes We are made to find the light, a miracle of heart Even at our birth God brought us forth" Like the butterfly, for a time they hide....well penned...i hope everything well with you chel, take care, hugs.

bert.~

Everything happens for a reason, right?And every life needs to be cherished and lived to it's fullpotential. Whie the heartbreak in this poem is clear I'mafraid it does not do the poet justice. The person who wrote this poem, You, should read through the lines and sprinkle in some hope because one day you will see what other reader's see: Someone who puts other's in their thoughts and will be returned that favor.

I liked how this poem spoke sadness in such realism and volume. I loved the vocab and the prayer and the longing to be needed and have things straightened out.

Chels hun

I came back to read this today because as you know last night I was speechless. I feel your pain A.I.D and I know how hard this is on you.
I hope you are feeling much better today...keep the faith girl !
Much love XXXX

Aww hun this has made me feel a bit sad. this was a really sad and very heartfelt poem. ur not useless at all dnt eva think that!! keep expressing urself hun - its always good to get ur feelings out on paper =] xx

Aww.. this is such a sad and heartfelt write. I hope that you don't really feel this way :) But you did an amazing job on this poem. 5/5

We ask him to hear are prayer but sometimes its seems even he don't hear us. We feel alone to deal with horrible moments in our life & sadness. I can relate to your prayer(your poem). Keep up the good work! Check out my poems & leave comments & votes! Thank You!

Ur an awesome writer chels :) i hate how you can portray your emotion perfectly! it makes me cry! lol I think it's an awesome gift to have. use it. i sent u a pm for the rest of my university style lecture ha. :P

i HART you! ruthie xoxo

That's really sad, and i hope it isn't true. great write, 5/5

Such a heartfelt yet such a sad poem. The last stanza was my favourite, it was so bittersweet and just summed up the whole poem perfectly.
5/5
*Gem*

5/5 this is a great poem. Your not useless. Everyone has a purpose. I sometimes feel that way to "useless". I think everyone does sometimes. Keep writing hun.

Sad story

I like this poem. even though its very sad, i still like it, and i can relate to this poem.
ps- check out ma poems, pplllzzz comment + vote

Wow..hunnie this poem is so sad i t shows so much in this one single piece.
I do the same thing i write down what i feel well to me this poem is great i love it with all my heart.
I dont even kno whow to explain how i like this poem but there is something that glitters through it slowly.
I'm sure that every thing will be ok sweetie.
xox roxyxox (wish you the best)

WOW. this poem broke my heart
well written. as for god answering
you good luck with that. I realize
while i live the life you desribe
that god is either too busy or there
is no such person. you better talk to someone soon and get help or. Your
get older. move out youth . and
continue the vicious cycle. i know
it sounds fu** up but thats how it works. PAIN IS A UNAVOILDABLE PART
OF LIFE. thank you for sharing.