Prisoner of paradise

by robin milford   Nov 5, 2006


I am winking at the witch
howling at the moon
Afraid of the fire
but liven for the flame
I don't want to burn in paradise

He's got me wanting the old way
being Daddy's little cutie
missing his touch

His loves taking me prisoner
my hearts doing time
He's got me in deep with the devil
in his hypnotizing eyes

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem wonder job lol thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    MY FAV STANZA:

    'His loves taking me prisoner
    my hearts doing time
    He's got me in deep with the devil
    in his hypnotizing eyes'

    Nice ! I like your choice of words. Their very strong !

    A title ? Sorry, nothing is popping into my head !

    5/5

    Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

  • 17 years ago

    by CE

    I think that a good title would be In paradise, but thats just me

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ That was confusing. Lol +.+

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