If I tried...

by The Undoing   Nov 6, 2006


If I tried to tell you how I felt,
I would write on forever.
Because when I see you I melt,
And because I'll stop loving you never.

If I tried to show you how much I loved you,
I would never know where to start.
Because one million words would hardly do,
But you know all the words, would come from my heart.

If I tried to explain, how much I care for you,
I would have to pause the world for a day.
Because there are no words that do,
And a day would not do for what I would say.

If you asked me if I loved you,
I would not know how to reply.
Yes would leave me feeling blue,
Because babe my love goes past the sky.

If you ever need to be heard,
Or if you need to be held.
I'll be there for you, I'll hear every word,
Whether they are cried, whispered or yelled.

If you need to know, the answer
You need to know if I love you.
Just hold me near, shut out fear,
My love will not falter or ever be untrue.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I really liked it and I thought that it flowed well. The rhyming was good and in general, it was sweet. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Syndey

    Wow. That was simply beautiful. Made me smile. =] You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Xcellent poem, Oh it's so sweet. I love how you smooth it all out, truly it made me tear up because it's so beautiful, xxcellent write..XP

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Thanks man - Canada pride.
    Yeah you;re stuff is good.
    Thanks for the comment/rate.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Nice job bro you and I have similar writting styles thats why were the best lol keep it up man 5/5