Comments : Excerpt from beneath my skin

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Lines so cold
    from the wintry truth
    of my own frozen lies
    cutting through another hallucination
    to reveal a pregnant pause,
    so inwardly one ear will turn

    to consciously absorb the subconscious

    lovely.

  • 17 years ago

    by ReBecca

    This was great Melissa, very haunting. This was my favorite verse:

    "but I'm afraid honesty
    might choke on itself
    before melting into a meaning
    that defines

    me
    (or someone worth listening to)

    Awesome!!