That's deep. It was really descriptive to. Don't stop.
anna sophia

Wow, dude, very amazing, write somemore poetry, i would love to read more, 5/5 from me girl, keep it up, you have an amazing talent....I LOVED IT!!! it was amazing and yeah....it was deep and it was gooood, 5/5

This is well written and very sad!! 5 outta 5.
keep up the good writing!

This is really good but sad good job...show alot of emotion...5/5

""All she needed was a little love
But now shes free, Free as a dove
Living in the sky above"" i liked that part, it really just touched home 5/5

This was really good and you portrayed a very sad feeling. The format was unique and different.. (: Very good jobbb. 5/5..