ADD THIS TO YOUR FEATURED!!!

I liked the beat in this, even though you didn't have a rhyme scheme...it's hard to explain, but this is definitely a very good piece of poetry. Not that good you say? haha you're shaping up to be one of my favorites.

Keep it up

Very well written. The flow was undisturbed and the sentiment really grips the reader. Beautrifully written yet sad all in one.

I really liked it. It had good flow but I thought confused rhyming? Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Such a great write, had alot of emotion and expression, i can easily relate.

goood work

sophie:)

p.s thanx for the comment

Well written , flows quite well, the rhymes work out very well
it's quite nice to see a relative young person to make a decent effort in writing good poetry,
keep it up, your poems show a talent for true poetry

Good job, i liked it. keep it up.

This is amazing, i love every image you use. well done xx

Wow like this is very very very very good!lol yea i like the line"pressure of our youth" because thats like so0o0o0oo true!
~April~

Very well written. i really do like this one. would you mind if i used it for one of my classes as a poem i have to memorize? i am not taking any credit at all for writing it.

x CheLs

Love it!!!..
its great!... i love the darkness in this poem
good work!