Comments : Black Widow

  • 13 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very nice poem. Lol, still I didn't not get where you were going, but it flowed very well. Great write! 5/5

    Taylor♥

  • 13 years ago

    by Cooper

    Her story has eight legs to it,
    And plenty of odd spins.
    The black widow they call her.
    Queen of a thousand sins.

    My favourite line out of any poem ever written. On this site, at least, lol.
    But wow, can you ever write, and this poem is definitely a great piece.
    A gift well used!

  • 13 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Awesome poem!!!! like all ur others!!! keep up the great work!
    5/5
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 13 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Awesome poem! I like how you described things and the ending was not as I expected, but I really liked the idea! Good work - original, might I add.

  • 13 years ago

    by Allison

    Hey! That was one of the best poems that I have read. I love the swist at the end and the rhyme scheme is awsome. Keep up the good work, and you can check out some of mine if you want.

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This poem is so great
    very well written, i give it a 5/5
    kep up the great work

  • Wow, great poem...loved the twist and every other word of it, the flow and rhythm was amazing. very well written.

  • 13 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5! AMAZING! I loved the ending! It was so great. Your an amazing poetress!

  • 13 years ago

    by ashley rose

    Different but goood
    it was a twist at the end loved it
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Ooh that had such a lovely twist. I loved the descriptive imagery designed to draw the reader in and the ending was a nice surprise.

  • 13 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. I liked this ^_^ It was so original. It like, swept me off my feet lol. I didn't see it coming.

    I really liked the imagery you used with this. The ending was mind-boggling, and kinda humerous. It was original, as I said before.

    The flow was awesome. I just read right through, and nothing seemed forced at all. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow. This is one of the best poems that I have EVER read. It was perfect! The flow, imagery, vocabulary, just everything was perfect! :) Loved it!

    Her story has eight legs to it,
    And plenty of odd spins.
    The black widow they call her.
    Queen of a thousand sins.

    ^ By far my favorite stanza. :) Fantastic!

    Stephanie

  • 13 years ago

    by Darien

    Very nice poem. You really incorporated the black widow spider with this girl. The traits of each are similar and you pointed it out that well. Very detailed and very creative. Good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. I loved this poem. It was very imaginative and you described everything very well. I loved the little twist at the ending. That one really made the poem even more amazing. My favorite stanza was:
    Her story has eight legs to it,
    And plenty of odd spins.
    The black widow they call her.
    Queen of a thousand sins.
    That stanza is perfect and really stuck with me. And also.. the last stanza was really good and gave the poem a great effect. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Mark

    Haha this was pretty good! I loved it.

    Her story has eight legs to it,
    And plenty of odd spins.
    The black widow they call her.
    Queen of a thousand sins.

    This was my favorite stanza .. great job indeed!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Wow...You are a very talented writer. You did an excellent job. I don't see anything that you could possible change, except, maybe make the last line a word longer or something. That might make it sound a little better.
    Overall 5/5

    >black&&blue

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Wonderful poem. Keep up the good work. I loved it.5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow, nice twist there.

    Same as a lot of people -

    "Her story has eight legs to it,
    And plenty of odd spins.
    The black widow they call her.
    Queen of a thousand sins."

    That stanza was by far the best out of the poem. This was excellent. You appear to write with ease, good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I LOVED this.
    The wording and imagery used were amazing, and I didn't expect that ending, that surprised me.
    I thought this was very unique and creative and you did a really good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by locky

    Awesome poem i would rate it but i don't know a high enough rateing really liked
    i hope to read more like this one
    great work