Wow.. I loved this poem. It was very imaginative and you described everything very well. I loved the little twist at the ending. That one really made the poem even more amazing. My favorite stanza was:
Her story has eight legs to it,
And plenty of odd spins.
The black widow they call her.
Queen of a thousand sins.
That stanza is perfect and really stuck with me. And also.. the last stanza was really good and gave the poem a great effect. Great job on this! 5/5
Wow...You are a very talented writer. You did an excellent job. I don't see anything that you could possible change, except, maybe make the last line a word longer or something. That might make it sound a little better.