Ummm. wow. i can understand how this poem has 30 votes and still a 5.0 rating. it is simply amazing.

every thing flowed so well and the ending made me want to read more! wonderful dear! and as you can see, i have obviously rated your poem 5/5

Very Good poem i enjoyed it alot. 5/5

Very Good poem i enjoyed it alot. 5/5

Great poem.. theres good imagery and flawless rhyme and flow.. and ahh i feel soo bad because you told me which poems to comment but its just really hard for me to read some of your poems.. so i hope you dont mind i read poems that arent under the dark category .. ill try to read the ones you requested but if not i promise ill make up the comments :D

Good poem. I didnt really understand all of it, but that might have just been me. It was still good.

Kalee

Haha that was awesome, great choice of words and a surprising twist! excellent.
much love and many kisses,
bex

This is a great poem. It flows very well. Great job.

I knew there was a reason I added you to my favories. I didn't expect the twist at the end. it was well written, and truly aawesome. the emtions were deep ,and strong, the message was quite chilling, and the word choice was absultly perfect.You did another brillant job 5/5

Wow thats really good,
I love the way you worded it, great work,
xx

Omg i love this poem! it totally rocks, u got serious talent.. 10/10 totally awesome.. keep writin..
xx

Wow.
I have to say.
I'm quite speechless.
This was...
WOW!
Perfect.
Gawd.
Wish I could say anything to make it better.
But I can't my dear.
It's just not possible.
Sorry :P
5/5?

The way you write poetry, is alot like how I use to write and I do enjoy it alot. Expecially this poem. Something about it was chilling and at the same time intense I honestly got hooked from the first line until the last. Interesting and also seemed quite cute to me in its own way also like a fairytale. Well done. ~mel

I've always thought it was far to easy for attractive women to seduce men and get them to do whatever they want, but it's true some men have that ability too and it becomes far more dangerous when they do. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

LOVED the ending! What a twist! Wasnt expecting it which is why it left me wanting more! Amazing poem you have here. Really captivated me from the beginning to the end. Your rhyming flowed so naturally without anything seeming out of place or forced. The imagery you painted with your chilling word usage blew me away. I loved each and every moment of it.

Well done.
*5/5*