Comments : My everything

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "everything you need
    is right here, its me"

    That was my fave line.
    And the whole poem has a cute message to it.
    Well done
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was very cute and so loving. It had a sweet ending and I enjoyed reading it :).

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Life is a bittersweet rhyme
    repeated over all time

    we cannot but write it
    our creative flame being lit

    good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Aww.. :-( ! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by BeLLa

    Naww this was soo cute and beautiful
    loved it
    good job
    =)