5/5. I didnt understand very well what you meant by this poem! Next time please be more understandable. But other then that it was a good poem!

I liked this one, it was sad, the words were very complex, it was a good write and i enjoyed it. well done

A very deep, meaningful poem. I really liked the last 2 lines. The lanugage used was really great! I was quite sad and i really liked it! Keep it up! xx

5/5. This is a great poem. I enjoyed reading it again.

How... sad. :[
This is amazing.
Amazinger than amazing, actually. I like how you dropped it at the end- it seems like a proleuge (sp?) to a good book or something.
5/5

Wow, such a short poem packed with so much meaning..i love how you used "bitter kiss"
your words are so advanced, and so refreshing, i enjoyed, i repeat enjoyed reading this poem.
nice one, yo. 5;5

"rays of hope faded with his bitter kiss"
Now, see, I can't deny you a 5 when you've got a killer line like that, ne! Utterly fabulous work, I'm off to read more. Well done!

Wow, your very talented, i loved this poem very sad but yet very good.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.