Oh, that made me go all ' awwww' =]

the last stanza was my fave =D...
I might just go and read some more of your stuff =D

[..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

It was beautiful!!!

OH WOW! O_O THATS BRILLIANT!!!!!!

This is an amazing, well written piece. LOVE it! It's really beautiful. Keep writing. o.~

**Lor

Another great poem by one of the great poet here...... you have done a great job, and it is so greatly written.
I really like your word choice here as well...........
you are very talented........

a 5/5 from me.

Again Mushy BUT sweet. Mushy but sweet. Its good to see you feel this way about someone seeing how it makes you happy. Great work. Your talent is definately the lovey dovey stuff. :)
-Tess

Thats such a sweet poem, any woman with any depth would love that!

and your rythm is amazing, mind if I take a hint from that?

xxxx

Awhhhhhhhhhh i love it. so friggin' cute. and it was like PERFECT. especially the last stanza, yo'. so. keep up the amazing work, hun.

Well im not usually a jelous person, but in this case, i reeli am... :~( i wish i could write good poetry like you...

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i LOVED that poem!! it was soo good!
i can see the U have a PASSION for poetry!
keep them comming!

``love``Katharine
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I'm no big fan of love poetry but i like this.

Wonderful poem u r really gr8!!!!

God bless u

Good job keep it up

This is a very well written peice, the repetition works brilliantly and your feelings are very clearly conveyed. not much else i can say really as nothing to fault and everyone else has pritty much said everything. great epice

This has to be one of my favourite love poems.
I liked how you used the repetition for each stanza, it really got your feelings across.
My favourite part was the imagery and flow, it worked very well.

I love how ur rhyme isnt always intentionaly uoi kinda just let it fall as it may which keeps ur reder guessing .

lissa

Haha, I love this. I write from the other gender's perspective fairly often, so this was cool seeing someone else do it. However, I did notice that in all of your poems you use the word 'so' pretty consistently. That can be a good or bad thing. It definitely gives you your own "style of writing," but it can be repetitive. AND, I believe you meant woman in the last stanza, instead of women. Still an awesome poem! 5/5!

Nery good poem joe, loved the flow, 5/5!!!

Awe. That's very sweet.

This is a very beautiful poem. You can feel the love spilling from your words excellent Job!