Wow.. true story? it's very good i think you have a talent for writing

A great read! is it true? Well, i like the way you made this poem tell a story. And i like the ending, im glad the boy saved her life :) . An excellent read! Keep it up! xx

Awww he saved her life. =] That's cute. Oh sorry. Haha. Good job. It was a good poem. You are a good writer. Keep it up and it will take you far. =]

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[[ I hope this is the right one you wanted me to r/r/c. ]] I especially like this poem because I can somewhat relate to it. Very well written and filled with such great emotions!!. 5/5*