Sad words youve written here, well its good to let your emotions out
and for sure Poetry is the best for it.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like

That was a pretty decent poem. Full of emotion, but I think it would be better if it rhymed more. Also, I think you could have been a little more original with some lines like running mascara. Overall, it was a good read, but the way it sounded made it seem a little awkward. Keep up the good work!! :]
4/5

This poem is so sad and filled with so much emotion. You did an amazing job on this. The descriptions that you used were wonderful and could really be pictured well. The emotions that you portrayed could be felt throughout the poem also. You did an amazing job on this! I hope that you don't really feel this way anymore and that everything is ok :) Once again, great job on this. 5/5

Creative setting. Nice topic. The only thing you can improve on is adding more metaphors instead of fill words and your transition. Keep it up

Hey, thats really good.if u like read my poem and give a comment.

Wow...I really liked this.
I enjoyed the use of imagery and the wording.
I found this to be sad and powerful, a wonderful write.

I can`t take it anymore and PULL the trigger
So BE IT
I PULL the trigger

Ohter than that its a good poem!

Narc xxx