Comments : An Angels Rose

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, it was original in theme and concept which is always nice.
    I thought the flow was off in one or two places, but apart from that, I found this very enjoyable.
    You have true talent.
    P.S I just got the comment now.

  • 13 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Now that was rather a long poem, haha.

    I really enjoyed it though. You have a somewhat unique style about your writing. Good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Why am I holding this?
    Where did it come from?
    Could it represent a kiss,
    That could become?

    Now she wants to have my heart,
    As I once wanted hers
    She was torn apart,
    Because she could not find the words
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    These two stanzas do not fit as well as the others. But I love this poem. It seems so peaceful. Even in the setting of a cemetary, it gives sort of a cherubic atmosphere, hence the angel. I love it. Amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah dude..this was AMAZING. very very very long..but totally worth the time to read it..it was so sad and WOW..im speechless. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mexi

    ....wow