Body tell
by Kylie Nov 10, 2006
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Blisters filled with passion, tranlucent lover's dearly held upon the breast of chafing hearts, Carving vains with crayons it was all an addiction with fantasies of a mature heart's love, exposed vessals of breaking pupils with orb's of intoxication reveal the true cracking jaw's in which those words you never spoke. |
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17 years ago
by *Charisma*
I've read quite a few of your poems, and one suggestion I have is that of organizing your thoughts into stanzas instead of like paragraphs, that way the readers can follow your thought's better. Hope this helps you!
Charisma*
