Spider (pleiades)

by goddess-glamourpuss   Nov 11, 2006


Silently anticipating a meal
Softly creeping
Spindly legs extended
Slowly closing in for the kill
Sudden movement
Spinning gossamer thread
Smoothly cocooned prey

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  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful job. I've got chills, not much of a spidar fan. Keep it up.
    I might just rate on your other ones unless there are specific poems you want me to comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Ha, you just made my fear of spiders a lot worse!!

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Great imagery. i like that there are now authors on here who actually know different types of poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I like this, i could see the spider creeping around, aww, i hate spiders. make me go all shivery.
    good poem, my friend

  • 17 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great poem! Love the wording. You are every talented poet keep it up!

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