Comments : The Broken Mess You See

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittanie

    Wow. Thats exactly how I feel you get straight down to the point. I [[LOVE]] it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Willow

    This is an amazing poem i know exactly how you feel. if you read some of my poems you will see i got through the same thing. great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel

    This poem explains just what I'm feeling. Very well written. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Beautifully filled with emotion. I noticed a few times you used commas where they really weren't necessary, but anyhow, the writing was fabulous.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that is amazing! beautiful job, you're a great writer. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    You are on a good enough level to experiment with other styles. I would like to see some of your future free-styles. Beautiful poem once again. I can really relate to
    "How can you feel so alone when everyone is near
    Shes the one who's missing, her heart not fully here"

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow! Another beautifully penned poem! You're really good at writing sad poems! keep up the good work! I really like the rhyming of the poem, keep it up. Flow was smooth, I like your choice of words!

    5/5! as always!