Very well written. VERY sad. =( I'm so sorry about all this. And I am even more sorry that there are people in this world who don't seem to care at all. *sigh* I wish you well...

~~Teres (Spanish)

Really nice poemm...i love the way it flowed..=] 5.5. deff..!!!

I like ur poem a lot it made me about cry... its amazing...

This is really good and im so sorry

It's a sad poem but very well writen and im sorry for what happened

Omg wonderful poem 5/5. it reminds me of my friend such a similar story so i feel for u. i can feel ur emotion. keep writing

Its so sad and written so well though!

.......... their aint anything i can really say...its a really good poem......thats all im gonna say.. i wish the ebst for u and for her with my heart even though mines is falling aprt

Im so sorry. im gald you told me to read this.. it amazing and sad.. and horrible. what happened. and thats so horrible. and i think im going to cry. i hope that man was locked up.. 5/5 it so sad. i love the repetitiveness.

thatsd all im gonna say,,}

x.x:Lauren

DAMN!!! that was extremely sad !! i swear i actually teared!! LOVE IT!! seriously i do!!! keep writting honey... ure great at it!!

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Such a horrific ordeal both you and your daughter have been through and i am so sorry for you both. Your love for you daughter is so evident through the powerful emotion you have portrayed through this poem. An excellent piece of poetry and i wish you both all the best.
Jade x

Its Grace, not Alexe, obviously. she hasnt gone just yet, dont wish her away, there is still time, she is strong, she can do it, we just have to believe. its a good poem, ive read the poem to her. xxx

Its Grace again, Nicole it sounds like the same person because it is, G.A. Darkened is on about Alexe as well babe. xxxx

Awwww..... this is so sad im so sorry i hope things get better for you. i love you.keep your head up.this is a great poem.5/5.

Babe its me alexe, im ok now just to let u know, u dont seem to answer my emails. just letting u know im ok now, its a really amazing poem xxxxxx