Very very good!

This was really goodd! everything right! 5/5

This is just me but i dont think that i got the whole point of the poem but i liked it.

Thsi wasnt too bad. at first, i thought it was kind of different that you had the different lengths of verses, but then i reallized it happened all throughout the poem, so then it was fine:) im sure that once you keep writing, your writing will improve greatly. its a good start!

Your stanzas were lengthed randomly. I don't know why, but in the beginning your flow was a little rough, but it smoothed out. Your word choice was nice. It was very cute, but I think this should go under love, not friendship. :] 5/5

Very nice poem! I really liked it, it was very different. The emotion in it was different, but definatley liked. The flow was a little forced in places, but all the while pleasant to read!
-ANNmaire

Wow, different.
It was good though, really good.
I loved the ending, but in this one the beginning was also really good.
I liked how you changed the stanzas, with each stanza was a tad different emotion, so it went well with the poem.
I really liked this poem, hun.

5/5

You got that right hunn! This poem, I don't even know what to say about it. I like it...It made me smile. It made me think of all the good things in life. Awesome job.

>black&&blue

I love smiling to a stranger,
And when I get one back,
I think I know how the world spins,
The love and happiness within
^^^^

Isn't that feeling of smiling to a stranger and receiving a smile back just precious. No words exchanged, just a smile makes us feel special in a world where things move so quickly now a days.

Wonderfully penned and a pleasure to read.
Take care & Happy Holidays deary!