Doctor, Doctor;

by daretolive   Nov 12, 2006


Doctor, Doctor;
I think I'm ill.
Doctor, Doctor,
Can you give me a pill?

Doctor, Doctor;
my palms are sweaty.
Doctor, Doctor;
My heart feels heavy.

Doctor, Doctor;
my minds often drifts
Doctor, Doctor;
Has Cupid given me a gift?

Doctor, Doctor;
I can't sleep at night.
Doctor, Doctor;
Am I alright?

Doctor, Doctor;
Is there a cure?
Doctor, Doctor;
How can you be so unsure?

Doctor, Doctor,
Do I have a bug?
Doctor, Doctor,
Am I in love?

Doctor, Doctor,
I think I fell hard.
Doctor, Doctor;
I hate this love card!

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Loved it! the only thing that wasn't fantasmical was the last stanza. idk why..i just didn't like it! :( but i love the rest of ur poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was really cute!!!...i loved it!....comment back please?! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by true lover

    Thanks for letting me tell u this!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by true lover

    My bf broke up with me today in a note and i love your poem it is so good!!!

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