Sadening!!!! i HATE those brothers and especially that mom!!!! and the ppl well dont get me started on them! well anyways bi i think this is the first time you write something that isnt related to your experiances and its a 5/5 for sure!!!!!!
i hope you write more poems like this in the future. kiss kiss my bi!!!!!

Lool.. yeah some people are actually that weird !!! and all they care about is peoples opinions ! anywayz..! thanx alot for the comment hun!

Nah anytime!!! he he he he he he he!!!!! you know that i will always comment cause you'll make sure that i do!

LOOOL! hell yeah !! u right about that hun bun ! ;)

Well somehow i wont call this a poem, but certainly you brought a very important issue here & the choice of words is amazing, great write overall....anything from heart is good to share...doesn't matter if its a poem or not.....keep writing

all the best and take care
5/5

Thaanx alot hun ...! =)

HEy seXy, this is such a piece! mashallah
u got it babe ,, its awesome and sooo sad:(
good luck

Another amazing poem! Keep it up hun! I just love them! Your poems have so much meaning! I love it! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Thaaaanx wad ! finally u decided to come comment ! =p

Awww... thaaanx burning wings!! thats soo sweeeet!!! =$

always glad to read ur comments hun bun!!!

Thaaanx honey bun! im glad u liked it .. and anytime ! =p

Great poem as allways

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaanxx locksy wocksy !!! =D