Comments : Anywhere I Lay My Head

  • 12 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    I LOVE this meaning. Not to get personal, but I think of my ex with this poem. The rhymes again seem a bit forced. Try to use bigger vocabulary. I bet if you use description a little bit more (not necessarily of settings or situations, but of emotions) you will love your poetry and be satisfied. Okay? Hope I helped!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I agree..it didnt seem forced at all,,,and it was very good. very nice use of words