Bryan, what a cute poem! It was well written and even though it was on the short side, it was stil beautiful! GReat job and keep it up!!

Ciao xx

Very good poem. I thought that it was sweet. I love it ;)

Good job.. i liked it

Hey! very sweet poem.. you must have been really inspired while writing. nice one!

That was beautiful. now if every guy could right like you. many girls would b in pure bliss.

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Once again so wonderful and congrats again on placing. You have so much talent...and it's ppl like you that make me love this site. Just think...I might have never read these! :) :) :)!!!
~Midnight Sun

That's sweet!!!

shelby

I really loved this poem. Your love pours from it. Excellent! Take Care Bryan. Cindy

Aw thats so sweet! there need to be more guys like you out there