Decieving

by Naomi   Nov 14, 2006


When I said I loved you,
It was a lie.
Lust is what
I felt inside.
I'm still wondering
what love is,
This couldn't have been it,
it wasn't all bliss.
We definitely wouldn't
be good together;
The two of us mixing
was like bad weather.
You were snow,
and I was the sun.
The task of staying together
could never be done.
If I say this over and over,
maybe I'll believe.
I'll get out of this okay,
if I can deceive me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-i rly like it! um-dont have many comments except flow and rhythm/rhyme was pretty good throughout, theme was cute but kinda sad.

    im giving it a 5.

    aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Ohhhh I love the twist at the end. It is actually a brilliant idea and very misleading. That is what makes this work so well.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Excellent poem! The flow was not forced at all which made the poem easy and pleasant to read!

    -AnnMarie

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very nicely written indeed

    all the best and take care
    5/5

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