Red Rose, Black Rose

by Crimson Moon   Nov 14, 2006


A nice life it seemed to be
I did love him and he liked me
After all the thorns I had to face
By the beautiful rose I was embraced
But I never realized I didn't reach the top
So again I was alone when I woke up

Last night my red rose leaved me
Sorrowful tears I cried
Bloody is now the once blue sea
For my heart love just died

Yet...this night near the lake I lie
My black rose is slowly covering me with kisses
In lust and passion together we fly
While my heart breaks into thousands of pieces

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    I love this Poem

  • 17 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    "But I never realized I didn't reach the top
    So again I was alone when I woke up"
    best stanza for me!!! good poem this one....keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    This poem would have been excellent if only the last two stanzas went on just a while longer. Other then that I loved the theme and the emotion was strong, the flow was easily read!

    Good write,
    -AnnMarie