Beautiful...I can hear the jazz music with the bass strumming....a deep rich voice speaking this...

more like

snap*snap*snap*snap*snap! lol 5/5

xox

--Ally

What a beautiful piece, I felt my heart melting as I read it! A wonderful, wonderful love poem!

I was blown away!

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Simon, this is beautiful! I agree with huggyqueenofcookies. I really can hear the music behind this, though not necessarily jazz, even if it is the most ideal. I can see the stage, the background, the lighting...but you get the picture. I guess I'm just saying that this is amazing and that I applaud your wonderful artistry.

Breathtaking, I'm with Illuminati, standing ovation!!! Simply beautiful and heart melting, you're such an amazing poet!

What could I possibly say? I mean really Mr. Hayes?!?!? YOU'RE GENUIS!!! That was beautiful. I don't remember you writing like this so long ago? Did you? LOL --- BEAUTIFUL WRITE MAN!!! I mean I'm speechless!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!! AWESOME!!! AWESOME!!!!

Its really fabulous work and great!

Very good rhyme...