Comments : Cheated .

  • 17 years ago

    by ; (Dark Angel

    I luv dis poem it really match me i went through the same thing,i feel u.

  • 17 years ago

    by ivon verdugo

    I like this poem alot. its really good. u deserve a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by mary*

    Whoa awesome poem!!

  • 17 years ago

    by steve

    Wow! that was fantastic, it was so perfect the flow, the rhymes, the blunt honest truth, terrific 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by jazmin

    Go get em female!!!! he aint worth anything if he cheated!!! this poem just made me realize dat my ex is just garbage and i can do better.... cheaters never change and dont desearve anothe chance!! thank u!!!!! good job!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    I'm a bit lost for words after reading this. I mean i absolutely loved it and i wish i could realise and move on like that. Your poems really move me and i am definetly putting you into my faves.
    5/5
    take care
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Woah.. And again another beautifully penned work.. The ending was perfect.. It summarizes the whole poem.. Flow was flawless..

    5/5 as always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Wow well this really amazed me.
    again your poems present such a unique but truthful view (i really think you're quite mature for your age btw).
    i'm glad you realized he wasn't worth you..cause really no guy that cheats is!
    in this one I especailly loved this stanza:

    No matter how much it hurts,
    Or how many tears you've shed.
    It was your fault for believing,
    The lies that you were fed.

    It really spoke to me. I feel the same way about a guy right now. Sometimes we're just too taken away by love to see clearly..thus the expression Love is Blind!
    but anyways, the poem was great..i LOVE it. absolutely true and very meaningful.
    keep it up! =]
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Omg i can totally relate...it aint even funny!!!

    5/5..if i could i would give u 10/5 lol