Im speechless. ='[

...i know how hard it is to loose someone you love, i lost my best friend/girlfriend a few months back to aids (i wrote a poem too "I Wasn't Expecting This"). and the grief is heartwrenching...but as hard as things are...you will survive and learn to see the best in all life gives you.
beautiful poem-5/5

AWWW its the best

So sweet, and sad. I love your choice of words, the poem is very descriptive, easy to understand and very beautiful. 5 from me, and thank you very muchly for the lovely comment! ^^
P.S. You have the same last name as someone I know, lol, just thought I'd say.

Death... the center point of many a poem. I allways get brought to tears reading things like this. Makes me want to hug someone. Once more, you have demonstrated your ability to make people sympathize with your writing. Well done.

Speechless.

This was just very sad and painful to read. It brought tears to my eyes seeing the feelings and emotions that were put into this poem. This topic it something that people all over the world can probably relate to at one point in their life. You're an amazing writer and you did a FANTASTIC job writing this one! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Awwwww. That's sad. I didn't think it was going to end that way. You suprised me!! Nice choice of words and the flow was smooth. Good job hunn. 5/5

I think this is a great poem :)

A beautiful, powerful and moving poem... you are very talented
amazing work!

Wow............Wow there really isnt any words but WOW!!!
~Kyra~

Great poem :)

Awww i loved this poem well done one of the best xx

Wow that was a wicked poem good one

This is really sad! it sucks to lose someone i lost my best friend and even though i wasnt dating him i got to watch my other friend go through hell....

Awh..
*Tear* it was so good.
like wow. thats beautiful and so sad.

GIRL! THIS POEM IS TO LONG!

Amazing work

This is such a nice poem
i can relate to it 100%
great job
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Oh, wow!
I know I have commented a lot but I just have to have something to read and I like your poems, so anyway!

This was so sad. The imagery was amazing. I could feel every single emotion that you were trying to get out. Just simply amazing!
Wonderful job! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Reminds me of "Left" by me :D Good stuff.