Thats sad. its something i could see my ex-boyfriend writting. it kinda scares me a little bit though. will you be alright? i mean what happens next?

I like this poem well actually i like dem all.

Touched..

As always, wonderful work.
My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought that was really hard hitting.

Heartbreakingly sad, really I am touched tears are standing in my eyes. I hope that it isn't true and you love again. You never cease to amaze me, your words are perfectly chosen, and the emtion is powerful. Well penned, perfectly written. please keep writting 5/5 for you deserve it.

Good poem

This poem touched me, its a really cool poem.

5/5

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Awesome poem! tried not to cry.. i can relate in a way... life's just not fair... but we still move on..