I was wondering when yo'd write another of your fabulous poems.
Again, you did such a great job. I love reading your poetry so very very much.

Awesome write! with a wonderful rhyme scheme. keep up the good work!

Wow, it was hard to realize that this is just an imagination...very powerful indeed

all the best and take care

As she though she lost him he grabbed her by her hand
((thought not though))

I loved this one. Different from the rest and beautifully written. It captured me until the end. Simply beautiful.

One suggestion: Get away from 4 lined stanzas. You're writing is beautiful, but if you tried styles I'm sure you'd triumph. But, it is only a suggestion from a fellow poet. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

It’s said that everyone who falls in the Devils’ trap
Can hear her jaded voice as she cries in mishap
“My name is Lacrymosa - I’m the entrance weeper,
My love wasn’t enough for this wretched demon keeper

So now I’m bound to suffer through eternity and beyond
As reward for foolishly believing in the existence of a bond,
I was mislead by my fears and now I cry my disgrace
The only thing left pure in me is the tears on my burnt face.”

^^^the best part of the poem.

that is a cool poem. i love reading whawt you write, it keeps me interested.

Another spectacular write.. you dont have one bad poem!

Wow i liked that poem A LOT!! it was another great and clever idea, it had great flow, and perfect rhyming apart from one bit..

"She jumped out the window and started to run
Tears pouring down her face dirty and ashen."

run and ashen don't really rhyme, and when i was reading it it had all been flowing so perfectly so when i got to that bit it just jumped out at me if u kow what i mean. but AWESOME poem overall, 5/5 :D

This is frikken awesome.
The whole depth and power in this poem...wow.
I don't even know what to say...this has blown me away.
There's not a single thing I would change about this.
It's perfect.