Comments : Blue Meets Gray

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Wow... Very nice.
    I liked how sweat and touching it was. Seriously worth a five.
    And that's all I have to say...

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    Wow.... i have nothing else to say but HOLY FRIGGEN SHIT!!!! oh my friggen god!!! that just made me realize how lucky you are to have someone like that. and how lucky she is to have you!!!! you write poetry about her... how much sweeter could you get! wow you guys are both super lucky. i just have to say that was prolly the best poem ive ever heard like seriously. i thought all your others were like SUPER SHIT HEAD GOOD but this just out shines them by like hell lol. GREAT JOB!
    -kels

  • 17 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    "You're the epitome of beauty" I love that word. Epitome. *contented sigh* And you used it well, too! It's a great poem; expressive, sweet, well written and emotional. A well deserved 5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww. I wish someone felt this way about me. I love, love poems. Especially ones from the heart. They mean so much more. I loved this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Aww. How sweet! I bet she gave you lots of kisses :P Very cute tripp. Maybe add some puncuation? But other than that, You We're Amazing!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    A f**kin mazing