That was breathtaking. I loved it. So true how society downgrades us for imperfections in their eyes. That was an absolutely beautiful write.

Wow, Luanne, this poem was absolutely mind blowing.

It really made me think, about the judgements well all make and how hurtful they can be.

You write so well and so beautifully Luanne, It is such a pleasure reading your work.

I will have to go and find that song now to listen to what inspired you.

You're a brilliant writer and lovely lady, Keep writing. and thanks for being such a great friend

Muchos LOVE
katie!
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Now that is a message that people could do with listening to!
It's all to easy to judge somone on how they look or their situation.
And it's not fair.
This poem is an inspiration (sp?) lol
Amazing...
*Gem*

Dear Friend,
You have captured the true meaning of compassion in this poem. It is trully heartbreaking to feel the pain of those you write about.

How often society looks down on those who have imperfections and think these souls are less than.

Thank you for opening the eyes of the judgemental souls who can't find compassion to lend strength to those who possess inner beauty instead of outer.

Jeannie

So that song has got to me an all time favorite for me. I watched a Maury episode where there was a little girl with a disease and that song kept her going...so he actually came on stage and sang it to her...I cried!!! Since then...I have loved that song to pieces!!!

I'm remember reading your poetry and wondering how the hell you did it...you have wowed me with this poem! It's funny how most people don't think about what they could do for others with something so simple until they themselves are being laughed at. It's clear that this is not the case for you... This poem is inspiring and I hope everyone who reads your words and listens to that song understand the message because it is divine. Your writing has only gotten BETTER!! I'm so happy I came on here!!! I miss reading this stuff!! Ok so enough rambling!!! Awesome stuff!!! Take Care!!!

Wow...this poem was so deep and so strong. I do know the song, your words are just as beautiful if not more. We often go in our lives without a care, mocking those who are poor or suffering, without fully knowing why. Your poem was so true, it was beautiful.

This is so beautiful. This poem really touched me. I always try to give a smile or a caring word to those that I know are in need of it and even to those that don't. that is just the type of person I am. I have seen a lot of what you described, people laughing at those that are unfortunate. I myself call it ignorance. Another great job done by you. You have put me to tears with this lovely poem. I don't think that I need to say more but 5/5
keep writing . You really inspire me.

Love
Letty

Nice write. Very true. Unfortunately there are people in the world who are inconsiderate of others feelings or who simply just don't care. The last stanza is especially touching.

I have a poem called "With this Crutch", that is also in honor of those less fortunate. I've read 3 of your poems now and they are all so purely felt. You get across what you want to say with great talent.

Luanne
This poem really brought the tears flowing. What a excellent piece:)

It only takes a moment
to give those less fortunate a smile
sometime a kind caring word
will push them that extra mile
so they can find peace, in a heart
filled with tears

So Please....don't laugh at me

Such a strong message .
Take Care Cindy

I love this poem too...it hits very hard at home for me...you are a great writer..5/5

keep it up

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