This is a great poem caught a lot of feeling here :) keep it up

I luv this one ive read a few of urs and i really luv this 1 5/5

I live all for these words i heard someone say " when you have no-one. no-one can hurt you...

love under will
rocky

An interesting style, i really liked it up to the last few lines where i think the 'flow' cuts and the meaning starts to waver a bit, defo don't like the last line either. But the first few lines are really gripping and nicely wrote =)