It was good, very lyrical. 5/5

You are doing wonderful honey...keep up the good work...Much Love. (you''re just so young...you have an incredible talent) Keep doing what you're doing.

Yeah this poem had a really good rhythem throughtout it. I really enjoyed reading this, as it had a great flow, and good usage of lanuage. It was more of a song rather then a poem, thought i think a song would of been a bit longer. Still an excellent read. Keep up the great work! xx