Such a good way of putting it... we should all be free to make our own mistakes. you can feel your frustration in this. great poem x

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Great job. Passionate. And i think your quotes are amazing.

A great piece of work...keep it up

Lots of great thoughts here, but you don't seem like you're exactly sure what you're trying to say. or rather, you know what you're trying to say, but it seems like you had trouble finding the words to smoothly convey your message.

Great poem...speaks a lot of truth....keep up the good work =)

This one is hard to name but i really like it, some of my suggestions for titles that arent the best but all i could come up with would be like the reason or my speech idk