IM LOVIN IT! lol 2 much t.v 4 me
i really luv this 1
i really lykd this line
"you were the rose to my stem" its so kwl :)
5/5

Hi, what's up. This poem is awesome, and so sweet. well anywayz g2g. Sam

That gave me goosebumps lol i love this poem like that person is too good to be true but is real and very much loved awsome poem

This poem is amazing, i like this
"I'll know that you blessed them
with your smile shining bright
you were the rose to my stem
and guided me through the night". thats amazing man.

VERY GOOD!!!!

I love it!
So sweet, and cute, such a pleasure to read.

This poem is so sweet and I could feel the love in every typed word. The emotion was expressed so beautifully. *5/5*

Alyson

Very nice imagery
your vocabulary was amazing which made the imagery even more detailed
I like your style
and I really liked this poem
nice job

I really liked this poem.
It was cute and sweet.

But,
'You're my forever shining sun'
^ i don't like the word 'forever' in there, it throws off the flow a bit.

other than that wonderful job!

It sounds like it would be a great song..a great love song
And i would like to help you with a thing if you help me
loves=love's
I think you just mistyped this word this way

But other than that,it was awesome..so sweet and powerful
Love is that...

Keep it up,
Laura

Cute, very sweet, i like it
Dainee

This was a sweet poem, Liked it alot. It's goood reading happy poems like this. Your flow and rhyming were great. I didn't feel like any of it was forced at all. Awesome work!!

I enjoyed the whole poem, from beginning to end. It was wonderful! I loved how it kind of repeated the first stanza at the end, and I loved the stanza:

"You're the reason I don't break,
My air, my heart, my soul,
The reason for every breath I take,
Your loves beyond my control."

Very good job. The whole poem flows well and great metaphors. 5/5

This love poem is very emotional. It expresses so much feeling any girl would fall in love but hey I'm just a minor, what do I know? Anyways, nice work! 5/5!

This poems hasa great flow i love it its also very emotional keep up the great work

This is beautiful, the emotion is pure and deep.
This flows so well, and the wording is amazing, so beautifully penned
keep it up
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

This poem was beautifully written... so much feelings and emotions were really well put into it...I really liked this one... It was really deep... Hope to read more of your work... :)

It was a cool poem. I liked it. The flow was there and the word choice as always was wonderful. I gace it a 5/5.

Awww wow this was brillant. i really liked it a lot. you really have a way with words. what a great job you did on this. 5/5

~Kristina

Good poem