Comments : Change for the girl you \"love\"

  • 16 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Beautiful....maybe you could give this to him...this is very descriptive and it lays alot of your feelings down about it...if he cares he'd try...keep it up!!

    xox
    Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Fantastic, I couldn't praise you more. I love your choice of words, and the flow was delicate, and smooth. Lovely piece, well done! 5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Awesome job hunn. The flow was excellent and so was your choice of words. If this is all true, how about showing him this poem? That might work. 5/5

    >black&&blue

  • 15 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this is such a well written poem! the lines:

    For I know that no boy can ever be happy with this girl you see?
    No boy will ever be happy with a girl like me

    just struck me like a dagger. woww just wowww.

  • 15 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. that was so sad hun! :( chin up

    much love and many kisses,
    bex