The perfect day

by david jasinski   Nov 17, 2006


The sun is bright
The sky is blue
it's a perfect day
For me and you

With the flowers glooming
butterflies flying
under the oak tree
which we are lying

we share a moment
a tender kiss
and perfect timing
one cannot mis

we lay in the grass
you in my arms
we came a long way
two years so far

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erynn

    Hey...I posted a poem...Its called Cant say goodbye...so when u get a chance go look and comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Erynn

    I like it David!! I made an account now so ill post poems so u can comment them and let me know how ur doing!! I love you!! Be good && stay out of trouble! We will see you on Sunday!!! HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRi

    Awww how cute....=)

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