Broken Wings

by Carly   Nov 17, 2006


I would fly into the distance
but he's broken my wings
He's left a dagger in my heart
and the pain still stings
But now that I've met you
I'm opening new doors
Your wings look strong
Can I barrow yours?

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  • 17 years ago

    by miss melancholy

    Awww! i love it! it has wit mixed with cunning, and it makes u think. i love that at first it sounded like a depressing poem, and i was like... "uh, carly, i think u put it in the wrong category..." but then i read the end and i was like, "ha ha ha! COOL!" it also made me read the first part again, which was very clever of you. Bravo!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was so cute! i loved the ending it was strong and nicely worded. for a short one, it was one of the best short ones ive read.
    love ya lots,
    sore

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