I remeber

by Christina   Nov 17, 2006


I remember when you said that you would always be true.
I remember how we could be so unglued
I remember when you said that you had almost cried because of what my ex had done.
I remember when i was there for you when there was a gun pointed in your face.
I remember that you said that i would be hard to erase.
I remember that i told you if anything ever happen don't forget about me.
I remember you said OK and said i wont.
You lied to me about that, now it seems like we never had nothing at all.....
I miss you so much even though i dont tell a soul.
I secretly want you to come back to me but nobody's knows.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Foolish Heart

    Ok ur poem is kinda...jumpy...it doesnt have a good flow...maybe tahts cuz u rhymed some of it then you dont...it kinda sounds like you're puttin random things in the poem...im not tryin to be mean..i just want you to practice on flow first...other tahn that it was good

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