Wow. I can't believe you made your own style. That is pretty awesome. That makes me want to make my own style. You have inspired me. ;)
Awesome job overall. I see absolutely *nothing* wrong with it. Keep it up.

5/5

>black&&blue

Extremely interesting! the format is astounding. 5.0

Very good poem. I completety understand it. Keep up the the good work. 5/5

Wow, your own style? Now that's impressive! I really liked this. It flowed perfectly and was very interesting to read. =]

Wow, again, this is another amazing write. you really have talent, this poem was beautiful, and even though i didn't get the form (i never do lol) i absolutely love it. wonderful job 5/5

Erm...? i don't get why u have to have a wierd thing but it flows well enough!

Creative & Unique.
The flow was amazing and the structure was wonderful. It was different and that's what made it simply perfect! Great imagery and vocabulary, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I loved this.
It was beautifully written, unique in concept and very creative.
A wonderful job.

That is pretty cool lauren!

Congrats on such a unique style. It was great.

As for the poem itself... This, too, was very well done. Loved the emotional pull of the words. You have done an excellent job on this. Keep it up.

Jeannie