Wow.. this poem reminds me so much of how I felt when me and my ex were together. You did an amazing job on this poem and it was very beautifully written. I loved the last stanza.. it really left quite an impact on me. This poem was filled with so much emotion and was just absolutely beautiful. 5/5 Keep it up!

This was so nice and it carry's emotion,, actually i can relate at the same i felt sad and i can feel the sadness and very nice emotion.. great job of ur's keep it up

This was pretty good. I thought it could have maybe flowed a little better. I don't like how the stanza's are all, jumpy, if you like. I would also suggest you capitalize where you need to (e.g. when saying 'i').

Apart from that, the rhyming was good and enjoyed reading it.

Omg that was a realy great poem its so sad i almost cryed ...that was one of the best poems i read ..5/5 keep it coming.

Okay don't forget, a poet who uses grammer and punctuation gets a better score for reading over and looking for mistakes.
Example:
Capital I's, commas, and periods.

Also don't forget that the beginning of each line is capitalized.
Example:
Walk out now please.
Before you see me.
Tare myself apart with these tears.
This is one of those fears.
Of saying goodbye.

Also don't forget to use Spell Check!

Okay, let us see what I can do.

Just try going through your poem, and fix some of your rhymes, a lot of them are forced. If you aren't comfortable rhyming, then don't rhyme, poems don't always have to.

Other than that!

I loved it! It was really great, and kinda sad, but I will give you a 5/5.

You got some really raw talent.

Very sad.
Nicely written poem.
Keep up the great work!
God Bless 5/5

~Tay