Wow, that really does suck. And the poem, i was able to feel the pain. a 5/5.

here are lil corrections if you dont mind:
for i will be
TRULY sad (really just doesnt sound like the right word in a poem sometimes.)
i know i must not
get toO upset

there were a few other places you probably wanna check, reread your poema dn see if there is anything you'd want to fix.

still you get a 5/5.

From one who has been through boot camp I agree the even that pain shadows in comparison to a lovers broken heart. I hope he comes back to and that you will write him everyday and not feel too bad if he doesn't write you back as often. he will be busy as you probably already know. peace