That was and awsome poem you are a very good poet.

Omg.....thats breath taking......

Love it. Really captivating.

That's really good, so sad though. can totally relate. oh thanks for your comment too.
xx

Wow. Very sad. Yu expressed yourself so well. I love it Niki.

I love this.. awwh. i think we have the same "problem" or whatever we call it. lol =')

Nice flow..its a great read and it bulids well, nice style choice. keep it up

lissa

I really like this poem, It really reminds me of a time when I was feeling exactly like this. But now my ex seems to be coming around again and in a way its kind of weird. BTW thank you for commenting on my poem! 5/5

Wow, great poem. keep up the good work. 5/5

It twas....tragic...but so...amazing in it's pain. I loved it, nice job. keep writing. Always-
Shattered and Broken

Wow, that's really great. You're basically awesome! Thanks for commenting me, it was my official first one ever. Anyway i love your writing style!

Awsome poem!!

Wonderful job, i love this part

"...And depression always takes over my laugh.
My heart has been dissolved by cheap alcohol...."

very deep and very good...

-love whitney-

Because each ending of pain opens a door to far worse hurt and even duller blades.- love this line