Letting go of reality

by tinna   Nov 20, 2006


Kiss me now,
before fantasy leaves us,
and the stars forget to bow,

Hold me close,
before summer ends
and dead will be the they rose,

Touch me deep,
without wondering when this will end,
and I will wake up and weep,

Lie down and sleep,
before nightmares come,
and monsters scary will creep,

Dance with me,
before the music ends
and all is quiet but one key,

Forget you're fears,
before reality strikes,
and all has left but tears,

Whisper in my ear,
before I leave, so I can hear,
and wake up next to you my dear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    We musy appreciate what we ave and never take it for granted because before long it will all be gone excellent poem 5/5 xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Aww so sweet:) how can they give you less then a 5? I don't see whats wrong with this poem. I love it:)

    ps. thank you for the comments on my poems. if you have time could you read some more.

  • 17 years ago

    by Reborn Rival

    Very good peice! 5/5
    Please take care of yourself Tinna my firend. I'll always be there an ear to lend. But love has returned as life to my shell. I wish you the best, love not hell! Youre a great person, dont get me wrong, it's just i have only one chance let & theres no room to be wrong! Thank you for being just who you are!

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